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Mike
Carruthers:
In
business writing today we often use too many buzzwords - and buzzwords
are usually vague.
Ken O'Quinn:
For example: "initiative" is something that's
thrown around all of the time. If you asked people, "What
is an initiative?", you'll get eight or nine different
answers.
Writing consultant,
Ken O'Quinn, author of the book, Perfect
Phrases for Business Letters….
"Leverage"
is used far too often and 99% of the time when you see it, you
could substitute the word "use" because that's exactly
what is intended there. We have other phrases like: "going
forward"- most of the time it doesn't need to be in the
sentence at all because it's always accompanied by a future
tense verb. In other words people say, "This will help
us in our strategy, going forward." Well, if you say, "will
help" that's future tense- "going forward" simply
means the same thing.
"Functionality"
is the perfect example of a vague buzzword.
Nine times out
of ten if you look at the context in the sentence, what it refers
to is a technology's capability or its features. And if you
use either one of those words, the reader will immediately understand
what you mean.
And Ken would
like it if we would all stop ending letters or emails with the
phrase, "If you have any questions, please don't hesitate
to call."
You know how
often your phone rings - do you think anybody ever hesitates
to call you? The last line in almost anything that I write is,
"Please call or write anytime with questions - period."
At somethingyoushouldknow.net
I'm Mike Carruthers and that's Something You Should Know.
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